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Post  Murazar Dauthi Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:57 am

DOSSIER: Sabrian Combatant
RANK: Legionary Prime

DETAILS

-NAME


Murazar Dauthi

Alias: La Volpe (The Fox) (Its what everyone in the profession knows him by and what he registered himself as in the Uprising. His real name is in the churchs catalogues and would be extremely difficult to connect Murazar Dauthi with La Volpe without extensive research.)

-GENDER

Male.

-AGE

32 years of age. Looks his age.

-BIRTHPLACE

Sabrie, The South.

-BIRTHDATE

31/12/398AR


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-PICTURE

Spoiler:


-DESCRIPTION

Around 5'9" in terms of height and weighing roughly a hundred-fifty pounds of lean muscle, trimmed of fat. His hair is black going gray in some areas and his eyes are a beautiful green hue. His skin color is primarily white with some tan to it due to him being either in the sun a lot or around night sneaking around in houses a lot of his spare time. Normally he smiles in a sort of cheerful manner that annoys people or makes them smile. His body posture is relaxed usually never tense. His nine o'clock beard and mustache are usually present despite him shaving it every night.

Murazar's hair is short, but well kept while he looks outwardly like your standard civilian guy walking around that enables him to blend into a crowd he is quite handsome according to many ladies. Murazar has many different types of clothing in order to blend in with folk of different status's and levels. The only thing that stands out from that wardrobe is his sneaking attire. Or stealth suit. The stealth suit is a water-resistant, fire-resistant leather armor that covers him in individual pieces. The suit is patchy and black with dark blue spread around it in order to break up his image and hide him in the shadows at night. In effect makes him vanish from normal vision without a light or some enhanced vision.

Gloves, fore arm guards, shin guards, his body is well armored with a cloak that clings to his body thrown over him with a hood usually. The front of his leather armor has many pouches that can fit more than just valuables, but also equipment he may need to use when he comes across obstacles. (Check Equipment App) His body holds many many scars all over his body. From bladed weapons, to lashings, being hanged but the rope broke, burns from chemicals and fires. His body looks like he was tortured for years in an imperial prison. He however holds no tattooed or extra markings. It almost seems as if other than the scars theirs nothing he'd want to be identified by.

-PRIMARY WEAPONS

-Sniper Rifle (Fires either tranquilizers or slugs) (Check Weapons App) Known for its accuracy with some rate of fire, this is a deadly weapon that could prove lethal in many situations.

-SECONDARY WEAPONS

-Flash Grenade (Blinds and gives a concussion to cut off hearing) (Check Weapons App) A small run-and-fade tactic that can be applied to most situations for escape and evasion or to quickly get the first blow.

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-SKILLS

-Is a highly trained and experienced thief, Therefore pickpocketing, stealing, sneaking, perception, lockpicking, blending into a populace, escape & evasion, all of those kinds of things he has at least a decade of experience in and a few years of pure training.
-Despite his misgivings about most things in life he is very well educated. Not because he wanted to though.
-Is a great actor via lots o' lying and decieving folks. It helps to convince a guard to let you into a manor instead of breaking in from the outside.
-Is a damn fine shot with his sniper rifle through years of practice shooting it. He rarely missed the exact target he meant to hit.
-Oddly he is a good cook, cure's and poison maker, those things really dont go hand in hand, but hey somehow it worked out.
-Great at navigating in a city, he always seems to know what to look for and where to go. Buildings individually also count.
-Oddly, he can sew. It saves a lot of money to patch up a sneak suit than have questions and strange looks being tossed around at you.
-He's very well trained in sleeper holds and wrestling on the ground. Other than knocking out, killing someone from behind, or wrestling a single person he doesn't know much.
-Is an outstanding Tactical and Strategical master due to his complex thinking pattern for anything that resembles an operation.
-Has knowledge of the innerworkings of the majority of known courts, cultures and general statistic for the civilized worlds. Anything other than a city he only knows of them rather than actually knowing them.
-Murazar has an ability that he likes to use during any activity he conducts that requires more focus than normal. The void and break. It help focus his mind so he can do any normal action that he conducts with more precision, speed and efficiency. Lock picking in seconds rather than minutes, taking a second or two to put five extremely precise shoots in several targets rather than a few seconds into one target. Etcetera.

-WEAKNESSES

-Cant find his way through a forest for his life. Its like a whole 'nother world for him.
-Other than the wrestling and sneaking, he's screwed in a straight up fight.
-Many people know him in multiple cities, which in turn alerts the entire damn underworld that he has arrived. This could create either negative or very rarely and highly doubtful positive repercussions.
-Despite his friendly exterior he has no loyalty to anyone as of yet, other than for money.
-Hesistates to kill people, not because he cant but because he hates to do it.
-Has nightmares every time he sleeps and does not rest very well because of it.
-Has a binding code of morals and ethics he adhere's to out of his personal will.

-COMBAT STYLE

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Murazar's combat style is completely focused on one thing. Escape. If he cannot escape then he will find a way to escape. If its only a single adversary and he can force them on the ground he will do so. His primary form of combat is using his flash grenades or causing some other kind of diversion in order to stall his opponent(s) and moving out of the area while getting as far as he can before he becomes safe in a manner of speaking. That is if talking his way out of the situation doesn't suffice. Usually doesn't at that point anyway. If he has too many opponents or his opponent keeps getting back on track and finding him he will force them or the single opponent into a choke point and continuously blind and take shots at them with his sniper rifle before blocking their way or escaping.

If that fails or the situation demands it he will take down a single opponent by disarming them and taking them to the ground before wrestling them into submission and breaking their legs or arms to prevent them from following. If forced against multiple opponents and escape is completely unthinkable he will surrender if he knows he'll survive. Otherwise he will if necessary fight until he is dead or take insane measures to escape. Such as trying to climb down a tower without any rope. Murazar is also extremely adept at evading attacks and using his environment to help fight or escape if necessary. He's also not above kneeing someones nuts or gouging eyes to get away.

-PERSONALITY

The first thing you think of when you meet murazar is charming, ordinary, kind and a strange feeling that he sees and hears everything. The man is like a walking mask that seems to talk his way into or out of anything he comes across. Emotions seem to be there, but tightly controlled lest it ruins the professionalism he holds himself to. His humor seems to change depending on the person and the situation. Nothing about him seems solid, just fluid as if he molds himself to whatever comes his way. Extremely manipulative, strategic and tactical in nature he can plan operations and burglaries in multiple different ways and predict where something will go wrong and how to react onto another plans path.

However just underneath that layer is his other outer personality. Its for professionals and people he works with or for in a job. He is cynical, cold, casual, calculating and callous to put it simply when he is like this. As the people in his line of work must be dealt with as such or else they will eat him alive figuratively. He truthfully hates using this personality because of its uncaring nature, but usually he must use it simply because otherwise he wont have a job would he?

If you can get past either or those natures you discover an inner personality, one of true kindness and caring. One that seems to be hurt by all of his past deeds and acts. None of it from stealing mind you, just from accidental deaths and ones with no choice. Hurting people, etcetera. This personality is one that remains hidden from most folk unless you really are a friend and care for him you would never find it. Its one he lets his guard down around, the one that he can stop physically relaxing and let his mind relax. One he can actually talk to people and joke around and be happy.

On another note Murazar is a romantic at heart, past all the rogue and thievery. He is always looking for a girl to maybe marry one day and settle down with. Or marry another thief and go on to bigger and better things. He truthfully doubt's he'll find a girl like that, but you never know if don’t stop looking. Oh he has had plenty of relationships, none of the feared well and most were either for manipulation or just to do things easier in the line of work. He loves to read fictional and fantasy novels, nothing romantic usually just things about thieves and such that make him laugh and giggle.

-HISTORY

Murazar's family is completely unknown except for the fact that he was ditched off to a church in Sabrie. Maybe they didn't or couldn't support a kid and dropped them to the one place they knew a child would be taken care of? Maybe it was the first place out they found out of spite? No one knew, but the priests and priestesses of the church on the third level loved him and took care of him. They educated him, reading, writing, mathematics, geography, history, culture. You name it he got a decent education in it. He was treated fairly throughout his life in the church.

However strangely he always held himself a part from everyone, he held no relationships with anybody and seemed only focused on being introspective. He seemed to really take the fact that his parents abandoned him to heart and it hurt. He didn't even believe in what the church believed in, despite all their help to him and trying to convert him. Eventually he left when they had nothing left to teach him other than to be a priest which was something he just didn't want to do.

So he traveled for two years going from one major city to the next. He stayed in Yataris and was found by a thieves guild that was kept hidden and secret when he tried to pickpocket a member for food. He was taken in for four years as was taught all the basics that didn't change with technology. He was given his own kit and sneak suit that he helped make before he left deciding full membership wasn't something he wanted. He visited the silver wall to see that it really was there, never found a way through, over, under or around it but it was amazing none-the-less. He visited the weird wonders of dawntown and dusktown, noting the strange was things were there.

He visited the Directional Haven's and porthaven. Then he stopped in Aenias city, all this traveling took a year and some days. He stayed in Aenias city for a year maybe, while he did so he acquired a sniper rifle and some training in a mercenary outfit with it. The one thing he adhered to from the church was their extreme stance on killing. He had done it in between these times as thievery went wrong and danger came in the wilds and cities. The outfit however focused so much on it that it became sickening. So he left after he learned wrestling moves and how to shoot his sniper rifle.

Then he went back to Sabrie and stopped at port victor and Ill fortune on the way. After this he spent the remainder of the entire decade he had stealing, pickpocketing and creating quite a reputation for himself as a master thief in Sabrie. In that time he had mastered his sniper rifle all the basic arts of thievery and some of the more advanced. He kept his existence peaceful as possible and cozy in his profession.

Throughout his life he became like an orange. He had a nice smelling outer later with a hard thin layer and after that a soft core. He learned that if you must fight and kill you must. If you didn't need to you didn't. Call it pragmatism, call it weakness. He only did what he had to and thankfully usually succeeded and when he didn't he improvised his success. Murazar created many friends and enemies throughout his travels and despite it he has tried to avoid them all. He tried to create a quiet life of thievery with nothing, but quiet endeavors on his hand. Sort of like a retired man who still worked without all the hustle and bustle of life.

He however instead of growing tired of it felt like he could at the least gain some money and get better gear. So he turned to the uprising. To say the least the recruiter didn't know whether to hire him or arrest him. After getting it clear with the hire-ups they hired him. Murazar didn't really care, he could break out of the prisons and jails if he must as he had done so before within days or hours. Guards were usually careless and didn't know his reputation.

Within hours after all his physicals and such were done he was allowed to keep his gear and joined a rather special group in the uprising to fit his skillet.

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-CUSTOM RANK

-The Master Thief

-ALIAS/NICKNAME

- Mura

-OTHER CHARACTERS

- None


Last edited by Murazar Dauthi on Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:33 am; edited 2 times in total
Murazar Dauthi
Murazar Dauthi
THE MASTER THIEF

Posts : 6
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Join date : 2012-03-03
Age : 32
Location : Afghanistan currently

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Post  Opal Hutchinson Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:13 am

REVISE


1) What sort of combatant is he? I'm guessing Sabrian from your history, but you left it vague.

2) Ill Fortune, not III Fortune.

3) Special ability is intended to be a limit, not a passive ability, and this seems like more of a sustained overall skill as opposed to an activated ability. Change it up, please.

4) Grammar's kinda skewed across the board, capitalisation and the like, as well as splicing apostrophes, but you hit all the word counts, so no complaints here. If you wanna tidy it up, feel free.

5) I'm considering asking you to add at least the other piece of gear - the only one aside from the armour - to your weaponry, but that all depends on how actively he uses it. Think you can summarise that for me? Is it simply non-combat use, would he resort to using it should he be pushed to that, etc...?

6) La Volpe immediately makes me think Assassin's Creed, but that's just an addendum.
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Post  Murazar Dauthi Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:38 am

Grammer I will have to fix at a later date, at the moment I dont have access to more than just notepad.

Also the climbing gear is purely for climbing or other miscellaneous uses. I dont know how he would use it for combat when as close as he wants to get to someone for hand to hand he'd be on the ground and probably would have no time to use it then.

Also on La Volpe, its just "The Fox" translated from Latin. Which has been used before Assassins creed far more often. Since Fox's indicate cunning and a wily nature. Of which Mura would have to be to avoid killing people.
Murazar Dauthi
Murazar Dauthi
THE MASTER THIEF

Posts : 6
Credits : 5
Join date : 2012-03-03
Age : 32
Location : Afghanistan currently

Summary
Power Level: 1
Gender: Male
Rank: Legionary Prime

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Post  Opal Hutchinson Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:00 am

So, to clarify, everyone in the Uprising knows him as La Volpe?

I know it's just a translation - though it's Italian, not Latin.

You can also enable a spelling/grammar checker fairly easily in most default browsers, definitely Chrome/Explorer/Firefox.
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Post  Murazar Dauthi Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:31 am

Yes.

Alright.

Cant do it on this MWR computer since its not mine almost all the functions are locked.

Murazar Dauthi
Murazar Dauthi
THE MASTER THIEF

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Join date : 2012-03-03
Age : 32
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Post  Opal Hutchinson Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:33 am

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Post  Opal Hutchinson Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:34 am

Rollin, rollin, rollin
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